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Getting fresh

Journalists are trained to get the story first or at least gather new facts that are exclusive to their reports. As an author, you should be striving for a different sort of exclusivity – original ideas, characters, voices, structure and plot. After all, why would any publisher want to invest in a story that has basically been done before – unless you have a truly unique spin on the material?

While writing Game as Ned I had a day when I questioned whether I had any original ideas in my head. I picked up the Saturday Age and stumbled across a double page spread on Mark Haddon’s Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time. Not only did this oft-awarded book focus on a teenage narrator with an autism spectrum disorder but it was already so successful it had been added to the Victorian VCE reading list. Most Aussie authors would kill to have one of their titles make that list.

Given that I was writing a book narrated by a teen with an autism spectrum disorder, I feared nobody would be interested in a story so similar in subject matter to Haddon’s. Game over.

That night my wife and I scored a babysitter and had a night out. For want of other choices, we saw the Jack Nicholson movie Something’s Gotta Give. The plot, coincidentally, echoed that of a short story I’d just had short-listed in a writing competition. That realisation hit me like a bus. I became genuinely worried that I was just a big sponge for other people’s ideas. It was a dark day on the author odyssey.

On the up side, it inspired a major rewrite of the Game as Ned manuscript, a new co-narrator and, I believe, a stronger story.

My next book Five Parts Dead deals with death, dying, guilt and grief. It’s set at a lighthouse in South Australia. Not so long ago I stumbled across reviews of two new YA novels – one focusing on exactly the themes I’m tackling*, the other set at a remote West Australian lighthouse. Ouch.

Perhaps I’m older and wiser now. I’m certainly more philosophical. It’s impossible to prevent overlap between stories.

Death and grief are universal themes. People have been writing about them since… forever.

Lighthouses are evocative and iconic**. Umpteen books have been written about them.

What I have to work on is delivering a fresh way of looking at age-old subjects. Screenwriting guru Robert McKee once wrote a dedication for me in his book, Story. It read: “To Tim, Write the truth.” I see my task as an author as finding a new truth that’s worthy of a) publication and b) reading.

That’s my focus while I’m working towards an end of year deadline for my Five Parts Dead edits.

*I’m currently reading this book, Lia Hills’ The Beginner’s Guide to Living. I thoroughly recommend it – probably to readers 16 and up. Sure, Lia covers very similar issues to those I’m trying to tackle. Thankfully, she does so in very different ways – even if we reference some of the same materials.

**My Word of the Week is the noun for lighthouse lovers – “pharologists”. Would you believe there’s a Facebook group for lighthouse buffs entitled “Pharologists are light-headed”? Of course there is.

Word of the week # 9: Hanami

The Japanese have a noun for the activity of ‘flower viewing’ – hanami.

One of the first phrases I learnt in secondary school Japanese translates as “shall we go flower viewing” (Hanami ni ikimashoo ka) – and it has stayed with me ever since.

A couple of years ago a mate and I did an impromptu Tokyo trip and just caught the end of the cherry blossom season. I was rapt to witness the blossom worshippers celebrating spring. All power to a culture that can see the magic and meditation in how petals fall, I say.

I subsequently dug up my back yard and replaced the drought-ravaged lawn with crushed rock. A garden redesign takes longer than writing a novel but I’m working towards a Japanese feel, with a bias to native Australian plants to bring the birds back. Here’s part of the work in progress during Melbourne’s own cherry blossom season – before the cold snap washed it all away.

Melbourne spring
Melbourne spring

Word(s) of the week #8

Critical Mess (noun) – the tipping point for domestic mess at which physical and mental health are endangered by clutter and the inability to put anything away. In the Little Monkey’s room, we are constantly on the cusp of Critical Mess.

Another word that’s relevant here is the noun ‘kipple’, as coined by Philip K Dick in Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep (aka Blade Runner). Kipple refers to the junk that seemingly accumulates by itself in a home. Whenever you leave a room kipplisation occurs and you return to a space more cluttered and messy than you left. Definitely happens at my house.