Getting fresh

Journalists are trained to get the story first or at least gather new facts that are exclusive to their reports. As an author, you should be striving for a different sort of exclusivity – original ideas, characters, voices, structure and plot. After all, why would any publisher want to invest in a story that has basically been done before – unless you have a truly unique spin on the material?

While writing Game as Ned I had a day when I questioned whether I had any original ideas in my head. I picked up the Saturday Age and stumbled across a double page spread on Mark Haddon’s Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time. Not only did this oft-awarded book focus on a teenage narrator with an autism spectrum disorder but it was already so successful it had been added to the Victorian VCE reading list. Most Aussie authors would kill to have one of their titles make that list.

Given that I was writing a book narrated by a teen with an autism spectrum disorder, I feared nobody would be interested in a story so similar in subject matter to Haddon’s. Game over.

That night my wife and I scored a babysitter and had a night out. For want of other choices, we saw the Jack Nicholson movie Something’s Gotta Give. The plot, coincidentally, echoed that of a short story I’d just had short-listed in a writing competition. That realisation hit me like a bus. I became genuinely worried that I was just a big sponge for other people’s ideas. It was a dark day on the author odyssey.

On the up side, it inspired a major rewrite of the Game as Ned manuscript, a new co-narrator and, I believe, a stronger story.

My next book Five Parts Dead deals with death, dying, guilt and grief. It’s set at a lighthouse in South Australia. Not so long ago I stumbled across reviews of two new YA novels – one focusing on exactly the themes I’m tackling*, the other set at a remote West Australian lighthouse. Ouch.

Perhaps I’m older and wiser now. I’m certainly more philosophical. It’s impossible to prevent overlap between stories.

Death and grief are universal themes. People have been writing about them since… forever.

Lighthouses are evocative and iconic**. Umpteen books have been written about them.

What I have to work on is delivering a fresh way of looking at age-old subjects. Screenwriting guru Robert McKee once wrote a dedication for me in his book, Story. It read: “To Tim, Write the truth.” I see my task as an author as finding a new truth that’s worthy of a) publication and b) reading.

That’s my focus while I’m working towards an end of year deadline for my Five Parts Dead edits.

*I’m currently reading this book, Lia Hills’ The Beginner’s Guide to Living. I thoroughly recommend it – probably to readers 16 and up. Sure, Lia covers very similar issues to those I’m trying to tackle. Thankfully, she does so in very different ways – even if we reference some of the same materials.

**My Word of the Week is the noun for lighthouse lovers – “pharologists”. Would you believe there’s a Facebook group for lighthouse buffs entitled “Pharologists are light-headed”? Of course there is.

6 thoughts on “Getting fresh”

  1. …what about ‘Five Parts Pharologists’ instead?

    My own most favouritest word ever since I had to utter it in a year 10 play – actually it’s two words – Pusillanimous Poltroon. Beautiful.

  2. I have a lesson plan I developed to encourage students in grades 5 and up to not be so quick to dismiss Fairy Tales. Often, as they grow up, children will come to see Fairy Tales as being for babies. However, when I read them the original versions of Brothers Grimm and Charles Perroult, I ask them to speculate on which modern day stories they may have read that have a similar feel or theme to them.

    Twilight, for instance. Is it not just a retelling of themes we grew familiar with in Beauty and The Beast and Cinderella and Little Red Riding Hood and Dracula?

    I believe, as readers, we instinctively seek out ‘retellings’ of story themes we love.

    I also believe that you are a wonderful storyteller. It is the wonderful storytellers that can write stories based on similar themes to ones we have experienced before as readers and yet present them as unique and unforgettable stories that encourage us to keep reading, in search of the next story that gives us yet another perspective on a theme well explored.

    I cannot wait to read Five Parts Dead 🙂

  3. G’day Simmone, that’s truly bizarre. (Sounds like a particularly unhelpful review.) Will certainly check out the essay, thanks. In the meantime, am smiling at this quote from Paris Review:

    James Ellroy on his novels: “If you’re confused about something in one of my books, you’ve just got to realize, Ellroy’s a master, and if I’m not following it, it’s my problem.”

    Gotta love that attitude. T

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